5 February, 2022, After midnight
Pandemonium in the mind
When nights become days
And days become nights
The mind gets foggy
And imagination runs
Wild!
What if this happens?
What if that occurs?
Save me from my mind
Save me from my soul
Save me from these things
If they become real
Be honest with me!
Just tell me the truth
If there is even a truth; that is
Clock strikes twelve
Worry strikes mind
Mind tortures soul
Soul tires mind
It goes on and on
Till I drift a-
way-
To this…dark-
ness and calm…
Where these thoughts flow
Without my control
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~ End!!? ~
- The original font (from Google Docs) which I wrote this poem in was permanent marker (For the bolded parts of course) to make it seem more hectic, chaotic and incoherent.
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Comments (5)
Love the tone of this - and very relatable! ☺️👏
I agree with Celia about the lines that really stick out. This is so beautifully done.
These lines work so so well: Worry strikes mind Mind tortures soul Soul tires mind Beautifully done and resonated so much. Felt like living insomnia and the overwhelm of the day 🤍
The bold and italics do help give out the chaotic emotion. It's what the mind feels like during a memory of a traumatic event, a panic attack, or your mind racing. Fantastic job.
It was a rollercoaster of a mind of a common person and that of an artist. I like the way you used the fonts to express differing emotions. Keep writing! Looking forward to more of your creative works. This is not your best creative work, rather one of the many creative works.