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The Decay

Anniversary entry for Real Poetic's challenge.

By Silver Serpent BooksPublished 4 days ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
The Decay
Photo by Evelyn Bertrand on Unsplash

Astatine has peeled our molecules apart, turning us into walking ghosts.

Nothing can stop the sharp fingers of time bringing ten to twenty to fifty to

Never again, to the slow parade from newlyweds to newly widowed.

I cannot stop the march of time, I cannot stop it from poisoning me with

Vivid dreams of lives we were supposed to live, worlds we wanted to

Explore with our hands and eyes and silver-lined tongues.

Rest swallowed you whole and never spat you out.

Sleep slaughtered you but it leaves me alone in the desert of a world

Annihilated by greed and rage and radioactive decay from where

Reality split into something nightmarish, something brutish where

You have been taken away from me but the time won't stop.

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Silver Serpent Books

Writer. Interested in all the rocks people have forgotten to turn over. There are whole worlds under there, you know. Dark ones too, even better.

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Comments (14)

  • Sarah Danielabout 9 hours ago

    This vivid piece explores relentless time, loss, and a world destroyed by greed and decay. It poignantly portrays the anguish of unrealized dreams and the brutal reality of loss, creating a profound sense of desolation.

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout 13 hours ago

    Congratulations on your top story.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 16 hours ago

    Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Lamar Wigginsabout 17 hours ago

    Wow! You've captured the emotion so well. My least favorite anniversaries are the death dates of loved ones. And I completely commiserate with what you had to say here. Congrats on your TS!

  • Cyrusa day ago

    Great imagery!

  • Paul Stewarta day ago

    Wow...damn...and several other words of astonishment!

  • Oh, the places in my heart you have stirred! Congrats on this top story!!

  • Mackenzie Davis3 days ago

    I adore this.

  • As always, this was so poignant and intense! Loved your take on this challenge!

  • Real Poetic4 days ago

    This is so brilliant. The emotion really comes through.

  • ROCK 4 days ago

    You fucking stun me with your mind; keep going and if the Vocal doesn't see it move on to some venue that does.

  • angela hepworth4 days ago

    So emotional and powerfully expressed! Made me a bit emotional myself 😭

  • D.K. Shepard4 days ago

    Absolutely haunting, Silver! The loss of a beloved and the feel that your own life has ended but time keeps ticking! β€œRest swallowed you whole and never spat you out. Sleep slaughtered you but it leaves me alone in the desert of a world” were such intensely sad lines!

  • Andrea Corwin 4 days ago

    So intense and sad! 😳

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