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3 February, 2022, night
Regrets
Crowded days
Lonely nights
I wish you were by my side
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Stroke of night
Hold me tight
Pull me in your arms tonight
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Speed of light
Pace of flight
Blur the lines of time and tide
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Drunken plight
Lost my might
Pity I let you off my sight.
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~ End ~
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- Short elegy with the persona mourning for the loss of his/her beloved. Tonality is useful in the analysis here to get the key emotion he/she goes through. How the beloved leaves him/her, you decide.
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Comments (4)
Poignant and love the rhyme. It's very beautiful. It's been a while since I have read a short elegy.
I love the rhyming in this, it adds something special to an already beautiful piece. Absolutely beautiful and powerful and yearning. Well done.
Such a simple but beautiful expression of regret. The rhyming somehow addded to the poignancy ot it 🤍
I liked this. Somehow you framed regret in such a beautiful way!