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Letdown

A sonnet

By TheSpinstressPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Letdown
Photo by Gift Habeshaw on Unsplash

For who’s so dumb they cannot write to thee?

A perfect muse if ever one was born.

The one so dumb might easily be me,

but what you’ll never read you cannot scorn.

I went to our museum, saw a gem

The whisky colour boasted by your eyes

a Cairngorm in a Georgian diadem;

the kind of ostentation you despise.

I thought it wouldn’t do for imagery

so took a walk along a beachy strand,

sure I would find some floating artistry;

and then I saw you with her hand-in-hand.

I felt a pressure lift, a great weight gone;

No need for this poetic marathon!

By Jessica Favaro on Unsplash

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Comments (2)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 months ago

    The guy she saw hand in hand with another at the beach was her boyfriend/husband?

  • Lovely sonnet… beautiful rhythm & rhyme. I agree… the beach is inspirational!… ‘so took a walk along a beachy strand, sure I would find some floating artistry” … but it turned out that you didn’t need to continue😳

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