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Mischa

The First Redhead

By Emma Kate ColemanPublished 11 months ago 4 min read
Top Story - August 2023
By Emma Kate Coleman (August 3, 2023)

Long ago, far from the ocean, where rocky hills rolled over the horizon, a family toiled day after day corralling a flock of burly, wooly sheep.

Mischa, the youngest of her brothers and sisters, often rode on their backs, her switch in hand, tapping their round buttocks at her father's direction through shallow valleys and over bubbling streams.

Mischa loved the sheep. They were her friends. Their wool kept her warm at night, when the air was still and the stars were clear. Their meat, swirled into a stew by her mother, filled her stomach at day's end. And their teeth, brown when they died but worn snow white after miles in Mischa's pocket, adorned the string about her neck.

One day, when Mischa was old enough to carry her father's staff, her family left her to watch the flock alone. Her brothers went off to hunt, her sisters to forage, and her father and mother to trade.

Light, gray clouds crawled over the wide, steppe sky like river ripples. The air was crisp and cool, the breeze gently brushing Mischa's bright hair.

She heard a distant howl, and she cocked her eyes and ears towards the horizon. She caught sight of a wolf's tail as the pest retreated beyond a distant, rocky hill. Her heart skipped when she thought of the sheep, and her hands tightened around her father's staff. She retrieved her trusty switch and moved the flock towards the other side of the vast steppe, away from the wolf-laden ridge.

Mischa had settled against a sitting sheep's wooly back, the cool breeze having chilled her neck, when she heard yet another howl. The clouds had rolled closer, veiling the far ridge in darkness and dampening the determined spirit in her heart.

Her gaze swept the landscape, but she saw no sign of her brothers or sisters. Fearing for the sheep's lives, Mischa stood and began to move the flock once more. This time, she thought, higher ground might prove safer, so she urged the sheep up a small hill.

A third low howl, muffled by a stormy rumble, stretched across the steppe towards Mischa as her foot landed on a loose rock.

She stumbled and yelped, and her father's staff hit the earth with a deafening thwack. The sheep bleated in shock as they scrambled up the hill, pushing dusty rocks down it towards Mischa as she struggled to plant her feet.

The sheep began to run, away from the wolves, but also from Mischa. Their bleats frightened each other, and their panic spread until the flock was a stampede, frantically crashing across the earth.

Their hoofbeats echoed in Mischa's bones and their cries lifted heat into her ears. She hefted her father's staff and rushed after them, her little legs flying faster than an eagle, her bright hair brushing streaks into the sky.

As her lungs began to burn and her feet began to slow, the herd appeared to dwindle. Like meat in her mother's stew as it flipped over the lip of the pot and into her bowl, the sheep reached a cliff and fell.

Panic set Mischa's heart on fire, and she ran, but not fast enough. She watched each and every wooly beast tumble to their deaths. She dragged her feet to the edge, and her father's staff hit the earth again as she looked down at the sheep’s bodies, a carpet of dust and blood slowly seeping into their white wool.

Tears streaked through the dust on her face as Mischa clamored down a steep nearby hillside. Her breaths shook as she neared the sheep, scattered like seeds upon the ground. Drops of rain pattered in red puddles as sorrow pulled her to her knees. She curled her fingers into their wool as she whimpered. The sky opened, and Mischa wailed. When her sobs grew too heavy, she slept.

Overnight, she soaked in the flock's blood and the sky’s rain. Her bright hair, drenched in the ill mud, darkened and turned. It retained its luster, but not its light. Her skin paled in the steppe's clear breeze, the warmth of the flock's bodies absent for the first and last time.

In the morning, when the eastern sun pierced her closed eyes, shooting golden visions into her pounding skull, Mischa woke and peeled herself off of the earth. She pulled a single tooth from the nearest sheep’s mouth and slipped it into her pocket. Then she left her friends to search for her family.

When they were reunited, Mischa's mother bathed her. She rinsed her ruddy hair day after day, but the red glint remained. Her brothers would go on to tease Mischa as she grew and the color deepened. Her father trusted her with a new flock, but never again with his staff. Her sisters envied her newfound allure. Her mother called her red head a curse.

But Mischa, who cherished the last ruddy traces of her friends' warmth, prayed for the flock's peace in golden steppes beyond and left her hair forever at the mercy of the wind.

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This myth was written in response to the Mythmaker Challenge issued by Vocal: “Write a myth to explain the fabled origin story of why something exists.”

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Emma Kate Coleman

An overworked hard news journalist seeking creativity and community. Lover of dogs, antique stores and homemade bread. Thrift queen and photography peasant. Happy to be here. :)

"Write hard and clear about what hurts." - Ernest Hemingway

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Comments (25)

  • Ian Read10 months ago

    I can't believe I missed this TS. The way you weave beauty and tragedy into this short narrative is marvelous. Congrats, it's well-deserved!

  • This is a wonderful piece of writing, I chose it because it was the one you pinned to the top and the title reminded me of the name of Misha Collins who plays Castiel, an Angel in Supernatural

  • Lucero King10 months ago

    This is beautiful and sorrowful - such a perfect balance of the two and so creative.

  • Stephanie Ginger11 months ago

    Congratulations and well deserved!

  • Stephanie Ginger11 months ago

    This is a beautifully-crafted myth - I could well believe it could have been handed down from mother to daughter through the centuries.

  • Veronica Coldiron11 months ago

    This was so poetically written! The part "legs flying faster than an eagle, her bright hair brushing streaks into the sky" felt like a watercolor to me. Heartbreaking, but BEAUTIFUL!

  • Jennifer L Osborne11 months ago

    Beautifully written, with such sensitivity!

  • Lamar Wiggins11 months ago

    I loved your Myth. It was perfectly crafted. So glad it got a top story, Congrats!

  • Natalie Wilkinson11 months ago

    Lovely illustration at the top.

  • Ruth Stewart11 months ago

    Lovely writing. The poor sheep though. She was very brave, was Mischa. Brilliant!

  • Kelly Khoo11 months ago

    This touching story of Mischa's courage and heartache really struck a chord with me. Her bond with the sheep and the challenges she faced were portrayed so vividly. The symbolism of her red hair adds depth to the narrative. Truly a memorable read.

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    Wow wow wow, goodness. This is exceptional, Emma! I love every single bit of this tale. It feels like something I already knew, but new. I love the tiniest details and the way you weaved them into the fabric of the story. Like recalling the mother's stew. And what a dramatic, epic beginning of a hair colour that is as stigmatised as it is revered. This is the story it deserves! Plus, as many have said, your artwork is as sublime as your use of words and storytelling. Congrats on Top Story and I feel certain this should have a placing in the challenge.

  • Gina C.11 months ago

    Wonderful tale with some darkness to it; really amazing job! And, I love your artwork so much. I wish I could draw like that 🥹❤️ Congrats on Top Story!

  • Thavien Yliaster11 months ago

    I must say that this is a refreshing story and it feels almost Biblical. Mischa, the first redhead upon the world's stage Mischa was a young girl at the time of her age When tending the sheep of the family's herd A wolf's deep howl made her concerned Driving the sheep, with the thwack of a stick Keeping them close, together they sticked Then once up a hill on a rock she had slipped Caught in debris, she nearly had tripped Now that she has red hair, her brothers do laugh But she is not trusted with her father's own staff Upon the thwack it had startled the sheep They fled up the hill, the sheep did so bleat In the end, they fell off the cliff Mischa's heart is now torn as a rift The sheep in the canyon like meat in a bowl The panic set in, the peace the wolf stole She laid with her friends, and cried to sleep She lost the lives of many a sheep Though her mother washes her hair, and it'll never again be pure Her sisters grow jealous of her newfound allure Contributing to superstition making it worse, Just like the Bible, her mother calls the color a "curse."

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    Oh wow. This was so creative. Well done.

  • Rob Angeli11 months ago

    Atmospheric and beautiful tale, congrats on top story! Heart-rending and heartwarming at once.

  • Naomi Gold11 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story! 🥂 I loved this so much. 💕

  • Real Poetic11 months ago

    Congratulations 🎉!!

  • Suze Kay11 months ago

    What a sad, lovely myth. I loved your descriptions of Mischa’s interactions with the natural world - it set me in your world immediately! Great job.

  • My favourite colour is red. It has always been the colour of love, blood, anger and revenge for me. Ariel is my favourite Disney Princess and I envy her red hair. Your story was dark but it was subtle. The teeth necklace and Mischa lying there with the blood drenched sheep. I really loved that. This story also made me think of The Boy Who Cried Wolf. You truly created a masterpiece here!

  • Test11 months ago

    That was SO creative, Emma! I really like the details, especially the repetitive mention of the father's staff. Is there another story in preparation? In any case, fantastic entry!

  • Gerard DiLeo11 months ago

    Ginger myth! Loved it.

  • Naomi Gold11 months ago

    Amazing! I love the original concept, the beautiful way you write, and the artwork. My heart broke for Mischa and the sheep, but I also envied her red hair.

  • Ashley Lima11 months ago

    This is fantastic. Very unique and creative concept. Wonderful job and good luck in the challenge! This is a phenomenal entry :)

  • Test11 months ago

    Such a creative story and idea, well written and just overall different and original :)

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