Critique request: Short Story
Hello! I hope this article finds you well. I have realized lately that I would like to dabble back into short stories and fiction writing. While I feel most comfortable in poetry, I have sometimes written short stories I enjoy. I wrote this story years ago and eventually wanted to create a manuscript. However, at this time, I would like to see if this is an idea anyone is interested in reading more about. All critiques are welcome! I want to make sure I start with this disclaimer, I wrote this when I was young, so take it with a grain of salt please.
