Woman Expose´'d
Ekphrastic Challenge July 2022
This poem was written in response to the Rattle® Poetry Ekphrastic Challenge for July 2022 and was ultimately not selected. You can find more information here.
https://www.rattle.com/ekphrastic/
The image that this poem was specifically written about can be found here. (Jaundré van Breda’s “Blueprint of a Dream”)
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Woman Exposé’d
Skin splayed with surgical precision
Flesh flayed for all
The world to witness woman
Exposé’d
The patriarchy hypothesize, predicting her plights
Studying the secret searchings of her soul
The musings and meanings from her own mouth dismissed by men
Her own dreams, desires, deemed derelict, discredited
Because it does not comply with their cut-out
Figurine of fictitious form
She does not vindicate their veiled views of virtuous vulnerability
Her energy is easier for them to understand, for them to handle
If it is emaciated, eviscerated, and undeveloped, if it is held back
So her body’s breath is bared
Bruised blue and beaten bloody
To temper her totality to tepidness
Her feathers sheared, fastened down
As not to unfurl her wings and fly
So she stands silenced
As on a stage, see
Woman
Exposé’d
Submitted under MRB
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Rae Fairchild (MRB)
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