Unusually Unkind Unicorns
This poem is brought to you by the letter U
Unusual ukuleles upon underwear under unitards.
Unknown unicorns unilaterally uttering uncomfortable upbraiding.
Using uncommon understatements, uttered under umbrellas.
Undermining un-utilized utensils, unable to understand un-approving unicyclists upheavals.
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Donna Fox (HKB)
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Uttered under umbrellas! That was hilarious! How do you even come up with these? You're amazing!
Very clever and really interesting to read. Please join us on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/groups/vocalplusassist/?ref=share
😂 Quite unusual and vastly under rated...
Nicely done, Donna 💕🙂
good job Donna. I Loved it....
Lines creates a cohesive and whimsical tone, while the use of uncommon words adds to the poem's overall charm. Well done!👍👍❤️
Well this is different. The stuff the great ones are made of. Totally out of the box. Should that 'to' be in there though. Haven't really checked that challenge out yet. Otherwise YEAH!
Lol!
Hahaha I LOL’d at the “uttered under umbrellas” part 🤣🤣🤣