target practice
a senryu
By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published 9 months ago • Updated 9 months ago • 1 min read
yesterday’s bullets
instead of shooting her down,
became poetry
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Comments (19)
Miss you Kayleigh ❤️🩷
Congratulations on Top Story. Relatable to many.
Love this ❤️ Congratulations on Top Story ❤️
Wow, how beautiful and raw. Brilliant work Kayleigh!
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Yayyyy I'm so happy that this got a Top Story! So I'm back to say congratulations!
Nice and CONGRATLUATIONS ON YOUR TOP STORY🎉🎉💖✌️
congratulations on TS status. this poem is fantastic. Love it.
Absolutely perfect and I'd have been really disappointed NOT to see Top Story up there. Amazing, Kayleigh!
Oh. My. God. This is absolutely fantastic. I don't know how to state how much I love this. Bravo 👏
Yes to the highest degree! My husband uses his pain this way, calls it his “drive” Great poem!
Beautifully written and such a lovely sentiment 🤍
Kayleigh, this one is my favorite. Possibly ever.
Blooming heck, pal! This is outstanding! Love that this is but 9 words. Congrats on Top Story - yay to sharing the front page...they must be over their faux-Scottish-hate haha (joke)
This is how a lot of my poetry came to be! Writing is so therapeutic! Loved your Senryu!
This is brilliant!! So inspiring and well written. I need to catch up on all your works Kayleigh!! I see from the notifications that you’ve been on a roll!!!
oh, this is sharp. I like this.
Oh how I love this. Basically encapsulated my thinking process on everything hahaha
Ah, I like this. We should all learn how to use that pain!