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protection spell #2

a senryū

By Naomi GoldPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
protection spell #2
Photo by Ilona Panych on Unsplash

infuriated

you can’t take my energy

you’ve given yours

Senryufact or fiction

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Comments (13)

  • Jay Kantor26 days ago

    Hi Naomi - I have no idea if this is reaching you; you have blocked the other notifications. I miss you so much but I don't have any Twitter/X or other ways to find you. Please say hello and tell me you're doing ok..! Jay Kantor.in.l.a.

  • Carly Bush5 months ago

    So succint yet so vivid. I like these shorter poems that say so much in so few words. I've never been able to do it very well, but you've inspired me. After reading your latest story, The Jig is Up, I'd love to connect on another platform. Do you have Instagram?

  • I really like that. So succinctly put but definitely something that feels important to always remember.

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Magnificent!!! Love this!!!💕♥️♥️

  • Alexander McEvoy5 months ago

    Remarkably powerful

  • No leech can suck your energy! You go gurl! I loved this!

  • Ashley Lima10 months ago

    this hits HARD. love it!

  • Paul Stewart10 months ago

    not going to lie, the powerful and emotive poem aside, jew haiku made me grin! ha!

  • Rob Angeli10 months ago

    Nice follow-up in every way to #1!

  • JBaz10 months ago

    Simple rule to live by, if only we can...

  • Jazzy 10 months ago

    This is SO powerful! Fuck I love haikus

  • 😉💯📝✨👌

  • Real Poetic10 months ago

    “You’ve given yours” is so powerful.

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