cheerful smile of yours
dazzling face
reflection of mischievousness
yet guiding us with care
memories in the camp
singing together
sharing stories in unison
and your beautiful poetic lines
though now,
we must bid farewell
you, who taught us
to fly higher
it’s your time
to spread your wings and,
embark on new adventures
you will always remain among the best
it’s not a ‘goodbye’ yet
just a ‘see you soon’
About the Creator
Riju Chaulagai
I am in my early 20s and I have been writing poems for a couple of years now.
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Very beautiful and touching poem Riju! Handles parting and separation with a very mature attitude. Thanks for posting, keep up the good work.