don't know why but it is the easiest for me to whip out a rhyme or poem
it's your monkeyitis says him
monkeyitis huh
yaaa
okay monkeyitis it is. A nonsense rhyme this time
that is why you can all the time rhyme
why not, I will play along
it's not wrong
you can't help having monkeyitis as you are the monkey
it's not me, it's you that have that hehe
no, it's you that looks like the photo above
hanging from the tree, not me, my Dove
yes, it is. Your pull up bar reminds me of this
i don't hang with one arm Miss
you could though, I know
okay, maybe I could but no that is not me
the resemblance I can clearly see
your monkeyitis has you lying about all of this
monkey's are liars then?
for sure they are when
they are lying about you
okay, that is all I have to say Boo.
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Denise E Lindquist
I am married with 7 children, 27 grands, and 12 great-grandchildren. I am a culture consultant part-time. I write A Poem a Day in February for 8 years now. I wrote 4 - 50,000 word stories in NaNoWriMo. I write on Vocal/Medium weekly.
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good work.. fun to read
Very cute poem and photo🤣
Hahahahahhahahaha this was so freaking hilarious! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
The banter between the characters adds a fun dynamic to the poem, with each playfully accusing the other of having "monkeyitis." The rhyme scheme and rhythm flow smoothly, making it an enjoyable read, wonderful, have a nice day!
OMG, this is hilarious...talking to your Boo!
Good one. It is for you to write these rhyme poems, but for me it is easier to write the critiques I write. Hoping you are enjoying them too as well as my color art.