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Eclipse

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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 months ago 1 min read
Eclipse
Photo by Ashish Thakur on Unsplash

Electronically vivid planted in the sky,

Choosing to be the courier for a unique change up high,

Lament to everyone’s eyes

Indomitable you stand alone as a

Paragon,

Silently socializing with the universe,

Ebullience…

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Comments (6)

  • Grz Colm2 months ago

    An intriguing entry! ☺️👏

  • Jazzy 3 months ago

    Beautiful

  • Marilyn Glover3 months ago

    Beautiful work! ❤️

  • This is absolutely great. Beautiful use of language!

  • Andrea Corwin 3 months ago

    Very nice! Eclipse, good job!❤️

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