Doctor Time
The Fates of Travelling Time
Have you ever wished
to turn back the clock?
Defy what transpired
to change what it is.
~
We watch life unfold
like fate on a needle.
Can we turn the hands
backward a moment or two?
~
Missed opportunities
An untimely space
A loss, or a wish to get
Back what we lost.
~
A clock is mechanical
Be wrong or be right
It can go backwards
Or slowly or faster or stop.
~
If switched off and then on
It cannot repair its own time
We must manually enter
To correct the errors it made.
~
If we set an 18th century clock
to tell our time for present,
would it replay the past
or tell our time like sand?
~
Did Superman have it right
to fly around the world ?
To use speed super fast
To reverse his own ache.
~
If I flew backwards real fast
to reverse the globes spin
would we cease to exist
or would the time be reset?
~
Can we turn the hands of a clock
and give a persons day back?
Can we let them re-live
and change what was done?
~
Can they see what is caused
when they change what it was?
can they argue with fate?
Would it change for the better?
~
Would the change set a loop
that perpetually we live,
or reset the fate as it
Always once was?
~
Our aches and our joys
it’s a part of our lives,
It’s a step in the way
of the choices they make.
~
A piece of our fate
we cannot deny
If time were reversed
would history repeat?
~
Everything happens for a
reason people say and yet
some forget the consequence
is always in the way.
~
If you set back the clock
to change what is done -
you must hold the knowledge
of what was before.
~
For how else would you stop
the repeat of history that was?
But let’s say we try and
you find the way back?
~
Everyone’s heart is set
to beat forwards,
you will always remember
and never forget.
~
If you find a way to turn
back the clock,
can you live out your time
forever knowing your true fate?
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A piece I wrote many years ago as a short story but have now re-vamped into a poem.
I spent a lot of time arguing back and forth with my Brother on the rules and loopholes of time travel over the years, this was the one rule of time travel we always agreed on. You can’t change the past without always knowing what really happened; furthermore changing the past would either bring about an infinite time loop to sustain the paradox or the time would simply snap back in place the way it always was!
What I wouldn’t give to have another day of arguing with him on this subject. 💔
Happy arguing Time Travellers 🤪
Thanks for reading 🕊️
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