Butt Blues
This Haiku is Shitty
Dutch oven sorrows
Taco Bell flatulence reeks
Amassed ass gas passed
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😂🤣😂
Lol, respect
Gosh! This reeked so bad! Lol!
Your haiku stinks :) Great work
Bravo!! 😁
This Haiku is Shitty...Most of them are!!!
Love the connection!
Lol!!! Loving you humorous one!!!💕😊💖
HAHAHAHAHAHA! And, you're back!! That was clever and funny :)