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A Dead Existence

Letting go is hard.

By Real PoeticPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Living together but never touching.

Splitting the bills—

The cost is too much for just

One to contribute financially…

Waiting for the other to hop

Out of the shower.

Hoping the other won’t take an hour.

Knowing the reason

They ended up roommates.

But too comfortable to leave.

And too hurt to move on.

Afraid of wasting so much time.

So terrified of being wrong.

Each are fighting demons

On opposite sides of the bed.

Never asking what’s going on

Inside of the others head.

A life where both have shed

Countless tears alone.

While right next to the other…

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Comments (7)

  • Kayleigh Fraser ✨10 months ago

    This was powerful imagery 💔✨ Great work!

  • Jazzy 10 months ago

    If this isn't about the romance dying, there is nothing else. This was so good. I felt this on a visceral level.

  • Stephen Kramer Avitabileabout a year ago

    Oh wow, that was really powerful and raw and honest. That one definitely spoke to me. You put this so eloquently and perfectly.

  • Resounding Reality, well written ❤️📝😉❗

  • Vanessa Oomsabout a year ago

    Great writing! The worst kind of loneliness is the kind you feel while you’re with someone. ❤️‍🩹

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    So very raw about how far away someone can be even when they are right there. ❤️

  • Cezanne Libellenabout a year ago

    Woah. This one is brutally depressing. Great job! You pulled this off well!

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