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The Wager: A tale of shipwreck, mutiny and murder
The Wager is a book about a boat called The Wager. It’s a good book and they’re planning on turning it into a movie. It’s about an aggressive captain. The crew hates him and mutiny’s against him, and the mutineers kill anyone loyal to him. It is a true story.
By Alex H Mittelman 11 months ago in Critique
MrBeast AKA MrMoney
YouTube's biggest name. I must say this guy could as well be the face of the entire platform! From his challenges to giving out wads of cash, this guy is so rich, he is giving it all away! This makes me ponder how does MrBeast do his taxes? I bet his accountants are losing their minds as I write these words.
By Halden Mile11 months ago in Critique
Trainwreck
Trainwreck is without question my favorite movie from Amy Schumer. It's a very charming film, with a great story, and a great backstory showing why the character is the way she is, but without pointing blame. It's absolutely hilarious and John Cena is incredible in this film. Very underrated film.
By Dyllon Rodillon11 months ago in Critique
Vocal
You weren’t my first. Probably not my last. But of all the others' past, you’re the one that’s lasted. Vocal, you’re the best writing platform I have found so far. You’ve helped me grow. You’ve made me mad. You’ve made me smile. You’ve made me the writer I am today.
By Atomic Historian11 months ago in Critique
The Giving Tree
The Giving Tree is all we need. It will make you laugh and cry. It will make your heart bleed. Published in 1964. Forever a work we will adore. Not many words. Not many needed. When we learned to care for a tree. We learned more than we ever needed.
By Atomic Historian11 months ago in Critique
The Wrestler
The Wrestler is a heartbreaking story about a man sacrificing every ounce of himself to a truly unforgiving world. This is a wonderful, relatable story of chasing your love despite all the pain and heartache. But it also has a great message to always live life on your terms, period.
By Dyllon Rodillon11 months ago in Critique
Uncut Gems
My goodness this film is truly something else. From start to finish this film is an emotional rollercoaster, with an extremely underrate performance by Adam Sandler. This film had me glued to the screen from start to finish. For all Adam Sandler fans, this has to be his pinnacle performance.
By Dyllon Rodillon11 months ago in Critique
Terminator 2 judgement day
Terminator 2, one of if not my favorite movie of all time. A fantastic sequel that should be the blueprint for all sequels. Perfectly balancing expanding on the story and characters, providing fan service of the original film, and providing great twists throughout the whole movie. Truly a masterpiece film.
By Dyllon Rodillon11 months ago in Critique
Requesting Critique of - Understand Writing Jargon and Learn How to Apply Effective Strategies
I am excited about this new community, Critique! Some time ago, I started writing a resource to support writers but never completed it because I didn't know if an audience would be receptive. It is my hope that readers in this new community can provide feedback. Is there an interest in this product? Any critique of the format and content of this article would be greatly appreciated. All comments will be thankfully accepted.
By Brenda Mahler11 months ago in Critique
Kokushinsan: Shadow of the Mountain Prologue - Childhood
Below the sharp, snow-covered peaks, an ocean of golden barely bent and ripples traveled among the fields. A dusty veil helped make those labyrinths of rock, ice, and snow seem a distant world. Up in the thin air of the Himalayan mountains, work was tedious and the yield was difficult, but at times like these, it was a better life, even in the shadow of Kokushinsan.
By Christopher Michael11 months ago in Critique