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Mona Lisa

A message through the ages

By emaPublished 11 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Mona Lisa
Photo by Eric TERRADE on Unsplash

The Genius hand gives eternal life to a woman.

Her smile is a mystery and her eyes a hidden message.

Dust and ages keep it secret,

like a dream with blurred edges and faded colors.

Creator, wanted to paint the soul,

an art that no one has managed to steal.

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ema

I invent stories, sometimes they need to be written.

Carpe Diem Tempus Fugit.

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Comments (4)

  • Jazzy 10 months ago

    So good!!!!! That painting is actually really small in real life too πŸ˜‚

  • Donna Fox (HKB)11 months ago

    This is so beautiful! I love that you used such a classic line in this piece, masterful work!

  • I agree with River. There definitely is something about her that doesn't quite meet the eye. Excellent review!

  • Test11 months ago

    This is beautifully put. I love the second line especially, that's something so notorious for the Mona Lisa. You captured her well

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