whitebark etched with black cracks
a map of your life
with the days burst upon your bark
ponds and lakes of inky splotches
streams and rivers rend your radius
a broken terrain that ants and beetles traverse
jagged boundaries of almost squares
almost triangles, almost rectangles
a meandering map of seasons in your life
you nurse lichen on your bosom that
sometimes hides insects or is nestled in nests
green and gray, fuzzy, crumbly, and smooth
charred crinkles, coral-like fingers, fuzzy moss and
slinky seaweed shapes, but
not in, or of, the sea or rainforest
in the open, sunlight glinting
wind testing your strength while
the lichen grips tightly to your bark
claiming its territory in the fresh air
You are a kind and measured Host
Copyright © 6/27/2024 by Andrea O. Corwin
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Comments (11)
Wow! You really captured the beauty of this tree. I loved: "ponds and lakes of inky splotches streams and rivers rend your radius"
Gorgeous!🤩 I used to think that unless trees had flowers, they were boring! Now I appreciate their interesting bark etc… this poem captures that!✅
So many elegant lines but the bit about almost squares, almost rectangles… really stole my attention. Incredibly well done
Love your nature poem!!! Fabulous visuals too!!!💕❤️❤️
Echoing Hannah, “ jagged boundaries of almost squares almost triangles, almost rectangles” was such a striking set of phrases amongst many other great lines of imagery!
Love the almost shapes, that really tethered it to the tree for me.
Beautiful
Awww, this was such a wonderful tribute! Loved your poem!
Trees are so awesome! Loved this Andrea!
The beautiful comparison of tree's physical features created powerful visuals in mind....I enjoyed reading it.
This was a great read.