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What He's Cooking

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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
What He's Cooking
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Maybe I

Am

Hungry...

Maybe I

Am

Anxious...

My stomach

Is

Turning

In

Circles...

Man what

Is

He

Cooking?

Having

Patience

Is like

Holding

Your

Pee...

It could

Only work

For so long...

I peered

Around the

Corner,

My eyes

Scattered

The

Whole

Kitchen...

I smelled Seasons

I think I have seen chickens...

I clutched my

Stomach

From the

Hunger

Created from

The

Delicious redolence...

I Smell

Biscuits

Or maybe

Fish sticks...

I Love

Peanut Butter

And

Jelly...

Although

It doesn't

Make

Me Full

It

Just Tastes

Yummy πŸ˜‹

I ran out of my

Bedroom

And

Down the

Hall...

But behind

His back

I could

See

Nothing

At All...

Mama sent

Me back

To my

Room...

She said when Dinner

Is Ready,

Dad will give me

A Holler!

But All

I really wanted

To know

Is

What was He Cooking?

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Comments (6)

  • Talia Devora2 years ago

    What a cute and fun poem! As a foodie myself, I know what it’s like to be hungry and impatient

  • KJ Aartila2 years ago

    I love this so much! A humorous poem about longing - and I love the reference to pee... :)

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Such a simple experience, and you made it so much more. Great work :)

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    This made me hungry in anticipation πŸ‘πŸ‘Œ

  • I really enjoyed reading this poem. It kept my interest to the end. Good job Lonzo.

  • The Dani Writer2 years ago

    Great format to hold engagement and keep interest. I like how you ran with this experience.

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