To the Stars
new beginnings; old starts
Evanescence has two faces—but none can be seen.
Cast your spells. Do. I won't intervene.
Loosen your grip. Lose your head. Let it go.
I succumb. I suppose I am lost. I'm your
Prey. Every day. Down below. From above, our
Senescence predetermined, from the start.
Escalating, elevating to the stars.
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Most people talk about things that bother them as a way to vent their emotions, another way is through writing. As I sit writing in my car, I ponder how much writing, in itself, has helped me become the person I am today. I have endless amounts of pages filled with poems, stories, and sometimes random blurbs. Writing is a window into your soul. The simple action of writing has benefited me; by helping me to achieve a better memory, helping me to learn and grow intellectually, and helping me to communicate my emotions.
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Comments (16)
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This is a beautiful piece. Congrats on the TS.
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I just love this <3 Happily subscribed, can't wait to read more
So, this has a lot in it. I feel like it's about marriage because of the rings andthe idea of senescence - a wish for it to last. But there also seems to be some discord there, some uncertainty. So, I'm not sure. It speaks of relationships and their progression anyway to me. Either way, right or wrong, it made me think and that is no bad thing.
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Oh, this is stupendous, Andrei! Just...yeah...clever and flows so beautifully! Well done! Congrats on Top Story!
I love the alliteration; this poem is lyrical and beautiful.
☺️👏Where you been hiding Andrei? Missed reading your pieces on here. Are you good? How’s the study?
Andrei this was a great piece!! I love how thought provoking this is and the whimsy of your language!!
I think I’ve reread this like five times trying to pin down the meaning. I think I could read it fifteen more and not get closer. But I’m still getting immense meaning from it. Beautiful and flickering.