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the webs

(you spin)

By Sara Published 4 months ago 1 min read

the webs you spin

are strung of soft lips

and gentle fingers.

the threads you tie

are gold

that make my eyes shine.

the strings you weave

are words

i never want to stop hearing.

you’re mine/don’t leave me/wait, I love you.

my arms are tied

to your truth

that is a lie.

my heart is bound

to your

empty chest.

my tears are stuck

in my throat

because i don’t want to cry.

i’m yours/i won’t leave you/i can’t say it back.

wool over my eyelids,

stuffed in my ears

like cotton balls,

your fingers weave

a web

in the shape of me.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Sara

Don’t look for love.

Be love.

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Comments (6)

  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶3 months ago

    Congratulations on winning Poppy”s March Prompts… this is very cleverly written heartache.

  • D.K. Shepard3 months ago

    Really excellent! Very well crafted piece featuring such strong web imagery!

  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    -My heart is bound to your empty chest- 😮🤩 I see why this won the challenge. Great work, Sara.

  • Poppy 4 months ago

    Oh. My. Gosh. This is incredible. Utterly enthralling start to finish. Literally every single line of this is a masterpiece.

  • Lindsay Sfara4 months ago

    Wow, the imagery and impact behind this poem. I was absolutely mesmerized while reading. Well done!

  • "My arms are tied to your truth that is a lie". Loved that line the most!

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