If only I had recognized you
Drunk on the new wine of romance
As a betrayal artist
A priestess of bad faith
All disappointment
Vile muttering
Bitter looks
Mirage
Dry
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D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.
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Comments (4)
That show it goes, huh- all wonder and great until the veil lifts. Nice entry.
Betrayal artist and priestess of bad faith, I especially loved those!
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Oooh! Well done! The first four lines were very grounding and set a great stage for the piece
Oh wow, DJ! You outperformed yourself with this stunning entry. Well done. I love that it stuck to the theme you set yourself and that every single word was exquisitely placed.