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Penelope's Eyes

Past and Future

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 21 days ago 1 min read
Penelope's Eyes
Photo by Drew Dizzy Graham on Unsplash

Penelope's eyes remind me of a far past

When I was an invisible sailor in love

With a woman who was looking for an expert.

Penelope's eyes emanate both love and hope

Shining through her dark eyes like flames of fleeting peace.

Her last name says it all; a word the never dies

Unlike Penelope's eyes; closed now, like her mouth,

Yet still penetrating my chest with their light warmth,

Allowing me to dream her in reality.

Penelope's eyes speak to me in Shakespeare's tongues;

Although it is the Bard's pussy that steals the show,

Along with her feet(s) and every other sentence.

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Dedicated to Penelope Israel.

love poems

About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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  • Dr. Jason Benskin21 days ago

    The imagery of her eyes, both a source of hope and a reminder of past love, resonates deeply. Your portrayal of the silent yet powerful communication through her gaze is evocative and poignant. The intertwining of personal memory with classical allusions enriches the narrative, making it both intimate and universal. Thank you for sharing such a touching piece.

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