Me is one big flaw
Got no love for her
You see kind
I see weak
Teach me the her you see
Eyes full of love for a girl
I don't know
In my walk and how I talk its easy to see I lack love for me
You say your love can carry two
One day I will know her too and we both can love me
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Jordan Sky Daniels
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Flower child
I rise with the moon
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I feel like you wrote this poem for me! It was so relatable and the ending was so inspirational!
Yeah I just read it again. This is the kind of poem I want to print and put somewhere I can see it.
Wow, this is hard hitting. It’s really good. And I feel it. This is the kind of love poem I need while reading through all the others 😂. I also really enjoy that you didn’t just say I need to love myself and therefore don’t need anyone else- I like that you invite someone to help you love you.