Mutual
What you learn, you never lose.
Grow apart with me, my darling dear.
Part like petals of a blossom,
And the soft wings of a dove.
Our stories intertwined,
For all of this time,
Unravel here
And leave us,
Only
Love.
About the Creator
Mama Magdalene
Catharsis of a hypomanic-depressive psychonaut...
Evolution Through Empathy! <3
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Comments (9)
Thank you for sharing this touching piece, it captures the complexities of relationships and the beauty of embracing change, love your works, subscribed.
Well-wrought! It is true that where people are absent, love can still remain, but it is not always pleasant. Nevertheless, "Better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all."
Gosh. How beautifully deep. What brilliant entry!
A softer resonance here. Excellent!
Oh, heavenly. What a beautiful landing.
Congrats on your top story.
Congrats on the Top Story! This is a beautiful poem!
Hey, your poem is wonderfully touching! 💗
Leave us only love. What a beautiful poem! Great entry to the Nonet Challenge.