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Oh, what a moment!

"holiday trip"

By Gloria PenelopePublished about a month ago 1 min read
Oh, what a moment!
Photo by Sebastian Coman Photography on Unsplash

This is a special holiday.

We're all together as a family.

Every year, we gather here.

My parents, cousins,

grandparents, and all of us

We adore spending holidays together.

Eating everything we need

Best cooked meals

We enjoy the goodness of life.

We embrace each other.

We exchange gifts.

Discussing and telling humorous stories.

Oh, what a moment!

Living together as a family

On a holiday trip, we enjoy

The joy is within our hearts.

Our connection gets stronger.

We are one big family.

 

 

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Comments (5)

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    Just wow! I like big families because the strength they have in a challenge is valuable. A lovely poem.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oh this was absolutely wonderful! Loved your poem!

  • Emos Sibu Poriei (Kaya)about a month ago

    I love this. Best!

  • shanmuga priyaabout a month ago

    Your descriptions are vivid and immersive, making it easy to visualize the scenes.

  • Dr. Jason Benskinabout a month ago

    The imagery and lyrical quality of your poem drew me in from the very first line. You have a unique talent for painting vivid pictures with your words, allowing readers to fully immerse themselves in the scenes you describe. The juxtaposition of beauty and transience in your poem struck a deep chord, reminding me of the preciousness of each moment we experience. Your exploration of the ephemeral nature of time and the intense emotions tied to specific moments was both moving and thought-provoking. The way you conveyed the bittersweet feeling of cherishing a fleeting instance was beautifully done, and it left a lasting impact on me.

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