If you truly love me,
I will love you equally.
But if you diminish
your affection for me
I will not inquire
or pursue you.
My affection for you
will gradually diminish.
I'll change and look for
A better person.
A fresh tree.
A fresh tree that will
not simply die,
it will give me its shadow,
and it will take your place.
Even when the sun sets,
the same tree will
stay fresh next to me
regardless of season.
When you get back
pretending to love me again.
I will remind you of how
you left me in the desert.
I'll remind you of that day
that hour, the minute
you abandoned me.
I'll remind you of
how I was left thirsty
in the desert
looking for water and
a tree for its shadow.
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Comments (4)
This is sad. Another provoking again? Hehehe. You have inspired me with this poem.
"When you get back pretending to love me again. I will remind you of how you left me in the desert. I'll remind you of that day that hour, the minute you abandoned me. I'll remind you of how I was left thirsty in the desert looking for water and a tree for its shadow." I loved these lines the most!!!
Your ability to weave together nature and human emotion in such a seamless manner is truly impressive. The way you described the search for a "fresh tree" as a quest for new beginnings resonated deeply with me. It’s a powerful reminder of the importance of continually seeking growth and embracing change, even when it feels daunting. I also appreciated the subtle nuances in your writing, such as the delicate balance between hope and perseverance. Your words carry a certain grace and wisdom that linger long after the last line.
I can feel the passion and emotion behind every line. Truly beautiful. Thank you for sharing.