Love At First Sight
This poem is for those who are hopeless romantics. Written as inspiration for my husband and I.
It happened not when I expected it.
Cupid struck twice..
Fate brought us together in the middle of a slumber.
In a strut one.. two.. three we saw each other across the room.
As we glace at each other, our minds ignored fears are erased..
The chemistry, attraction unbelievable...
My hand rises gliding through my hair I see him, I bite my bottom lip as my lust overtakes so does my desire...
He smiles, his body twitches as if not automatic.
The party is loud care to make way for something more intimate...
As his words slide from the tongue almost sounding seductive..
I took his suggestion, and followed...
As our lust, attraction, and chemistry get the better of us..
We take a skinny dip...
As our attraction grew love at first sight to me in you..
And a romantic evening in a pool with you turned into a evening screw...
As times goes on, this love grew into a romantic healthy stable relationships..
Set up from Cupids arrow flew at the Mr. Right to.
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Louise Blake-Michael (Risen Phoenix)
LouLou maintains a boundary between her professional endeavors and personal life. She wears many hats as an author, blogger, and content creator. In various projects, each one a testament to her dedication and passion for storytelling.
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very nice.
This was so beautiful!