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Let’s Escape

On a raft together

By Real PoeticPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Let’s float away on a raft and press pause.

Let’s get lost on the river—

Fishing for dinner.

Let’s survive on the land.

It’s not too much for us to handle…

We weren’t meant to live indoors for long.

I’d rather feel the sun in my pores.

Avoid the chores and sip some wine instead.

All I want is you and nature.

I’ll be fine.

I don’t mind the spiders and ticks.

As long as you do that trick with your

Tongue when the sun goes down…

I hope you don’t drown—

In the river.

I admire that you’re such a giver.

Let’s stop at a small village.

And deliver a meal.

We’ll have plenty to go around.

It’s the right thing to do.

I’ll prepare the stew.

It’ll be a lovely celebration.

With you, everyday is a vacation.

Oh, you’re ready to go!

I’ll send the location.

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Comments (4)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    This was so wholesome and it gave a strong sense of selflessness! I loved this so much!

  • Dylan about a year ago

    This is amazing!

  • Stephen Kramer Avitabileabout a year ago

    That was fantastic! What a flow to it, and I really enjoyed the wordplay and the comparisons there.

  • This poem feels gratis and that makes it enjoyable❤️💯📝😉Great Piece❗

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