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Let’s float away on a raft and press pause.
Let’s get lost on the river—
Fishing for dinner.
Let’s survive on the land.
It’s not too much for us to handle…
We weren’t meant to live indoors for long.
I’d rather feel the sun in my pores.
Avoid the chores and sip some wine instead.
All I want is you and nature.
I’ll be fine.
I don’t mind the spiders and ticks.
As long as you do that trick with your
Tongue when the sun goes down…
I hope you don’t drown—
In the river.
I admire that you’re such a giver.
Let’s stop at a small village.
And deliver a meal.
We’ll have plenty to go around.
It’s the right thing to do.
I’ll prepare the stew.
It’ll be a lovely celebration.
With you, everyday is a vacation.
Oh, you’re ready to go!
I’ll send the location.
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Comments (4)
This was so wholesome and it gave a strong sense of selflessness! I loved this so much!
This is amazing!
That was fantastic! What a flow to it, and I really enjoyed the wordplay and the comparisons there.
This poem feels gratis and that makes it enjoyable❤️💯📝😉Great Piece❗