There once was a Boy
Who sat in a tree
daydreaming of the hero he could be...
Changing Lives and living Financially Free...
But He carried a lot of weight and was Blinded by the things he couldn't see...
Suffocation comes from your own insecurities and makes your mind believe you can't Breathe.
Sometimes you have to listen and let your mind speak...
Smiling and crying
being his own sympathy
He sat back daydreaming in that Tree 🍃
One day he said “I just don't know what to do”.
He Thought he was lost and so he kept doing the same thing…
The thing he did the most was the things that changed his life...
So Even when you think your spinning inside insanity, keep going because that could be your talent calling you out to nurture it with more Passion...
Many of us think “What else can I do?”
I've learned that you have to do things over and over to Break into the fabric of Principles. Over and Over creates “Change”.
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Wise words 👍
Your writing is always so heartfelt and real. I love it and appreciate how much that takes to always put yourself out there. This poem was beautiful and insightful. I especially felt this line: "Suffocation comes from your own insecurities and makes your mind believe you can't Breathe." Great work :)
Loving it!!!💖😊💕
Nice poem. I daydream a lot myself, up in that tree.
Great! Thank you for sharing your poetry!💕