A short inverse poem inspired by my yearning for spring! Hope you enjoy.
I am open
to the world
I am free,
breathing new air.
The wind on my petals
suddenly shifts,
transforms me.
A warm embrace.
Only silence and peace,
closed and comfortable:
I sleep
About the Creator
Emmy B
I write some of my truths, and use words to weave stories and ideas together. Writing is a passion and an outlet for me and I hope to inspire, challenge, or simply be a reflection of others's experiences - to make people feel seen!
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Comments (5)
I like the seasons mixed in here, and how visual it becomes with “closed and comfortable”. Nice!
Well done! Makes me crave for the sleep I have to catch up on!
Sweet, and beautiful forwards and back. Great writing
Ouuu, this is so beautiful both ways! Nicely done 💕
Lovely nature poem!!! ❤️