I saw him standing there.
Love at first sight so true.
When he took my hand to take me away from this awful place.
Our love is at first sight.
I saw you across the room, when you took my hand I knew everything would be okay.
"I'm I'm Jake."
"I'm Alina."
Those words changed my life.
As I look into his bright blue eyes I know everything will be okay.
How I know you ask, I know because when I look into his I see a bright light.
That special connections, that instant meet cute, that's the moment right now.
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Louise Blake-Michael (Risen Phoenix)
LouLou maintains a boundary between her professional endeavors and personal life. She wears many hats as an author, blogger, and content creator. In various projects, each one a testament to her dedication and passion for storytelling.
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