Hopeless Romantic
A Poem for the Unnoticed
Took a sip of whiskey…
Feeling a little tipsy.
But, still thinking of you.
Wishing you knew just
How much you mean to me.
Everything you do affects the way
I navigate through my day.
I just wanna lie next to you
On every side all at once.
I may sound a little drunk…
But, it’s true.
You’re all I want to do right now…
I want your vow.
I need your heart.
Or else I’ll crumble
And fall apart.
The liquor doesn’t warm me like you.
I wish I could stick to you like glue.
If only you knew…
Who I am.
Stop scrolling through the gram.
I’m not on there!
I’m over here.
If I had one wish,
It’d be to make you appear.
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Comments (6)
Your poem beautifully captures the intoxicating feeling of longing and desire, where the mere thought of someone has the power to consume every aspect of your being. The imagery and emotions conveyed are heartfelt and relatable. Well done!💕🥰🙌
Lovely! I like your style of writting. I would be very happy if you go read one of my poems
This was so lovely! Gosh I loved this so much!
This was amazing! Love the honesty and appeal to many senses with the imagery. Really enjoyed this all the way through.
This melted my heart in all the ways possible. Thank you for sharing such an intimate poem.
"You're all I want to do" 🔥🔥