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In the depths of a tortured soul,
A young man's heart, a story to unfold.
A life of crime, a life of thrill,
A heart that breaks, a stomach that's ill.
The crimes, they came, a force so strong,
A life of pain, a life that's long.
But in the aftermath, a heart that's torn,
A life of sorrow, a life that mourns.
Forced to commit, a life of strife,
A heart that breaks, a life that's rife.
Yet in the thrill, a heart that swells,
A life of crime, a life that tells.
But in the end, a heart that's sick,
A life of pain, a life that's thick.
A young man's heart, a life in fear,
A life of crime, a life so clear.
A sad, heartbreaking poem, a tale of woe,
A life of crime, a heart that's low.
A young man's heart, a life in pain,
A life of thrill, a life that's vain.
A heart in turmoil, a life of strife,
A young man's heart, a life so rife.
In the depths of a tortured soul,
A young man's heart, a life to hold.
A life of crime, a life of thrill,
A heart that breaks, a stomach that's ill.
A sad, heartbreaking poem, a tale of woe,
A young man's heart, a life that's slow.
A heart in turmoil, a life in pain,
A young man's heart, a life that wanes.
In the depths of a tortured soul,
A young man's heart, a life to hold.
About the Creator
C. D. Guzman
After a long 18 years I am finally a free man.
Welcome to my therapy, my thoughts, my struggles, my life.
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Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Comments (4)
A lot of feelings in this one. Nicely written.
This was so poignant and emotional. Loved your poem!
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The wordplay is nice here.