Entering into the
Closeted space of your
Life & love
I find myself
Penumbrally
Shadowed hopelessly in
Endless eclipse.
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Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock
Retired Ordained Elder in The United Methodist Church having served for a total of 30 years in Missouri, South Dakota & Kansas.
Born in Watertown, SD on 9/26/1959. Married to Sandra Jellison-Knock on 1/24/1986. One son, Keenan, deceased.
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Hi Randy, just checking in with you.
Sir Knock, i hope all is well with you.
I see you, friend
Wonderful, Randy. 🙂💜 So much meaning, well condensed.
Very descriptive of "the feeling."
I think I read this five times so far and can't believe how much emotion you managed to pack into those 19 words!! Well done, my friend :)
Hey, where have you been hiding! Another great entry from you
Just saw this one...very nice!!!
Beautiful!
Beautiful.
This was so poignantly beautiful! Loved your Acrostic!
This is romantic, and I'm hopelessly charmed by it 🌒
This is great Randy. Well done.
Why does everyone think this is sad/beautiful. I see shadows and colors dancing happily between light and dark having a very romantic naughty tryst. Oh you are back, hope your trip was wonderful. Wait, you did go on a trip, right. You are well and all is right with the world? Happy to see you back.
Excellent acrostic!!
Glad to see you back!!!! Excellent Eclipse acoustic poetry ⭐️
Excellent.
No! Peek out, shine your light!
Ooo nice entry!! Incredible poem! 💌
This one feels sad and forlorn.
Feel that! Very much unrequited. Such a romantic !! Great work Randy! 😊👏 & hope you are going well.
This one has a sort of love-sick tone. Sweet!
Mackenzie is right. This very sad. Very beautiful, but sad.
Very evocative. Well done!
Oof. Goodness, I want to weep at that.