Eclipse the Sun, and Also the Sun
A.H. Mittelman
Exciting eclipse electrifies the air, the sun briefly disappeared.
Can’t see the sun, but that’s alright, the dark is cool, too.
Long live the sun, it’s beautiful.
I love the sun, the sun is love, peoples shadows dance before the eclipse, sun, sun, sun, sun, sun, the sun is being blocked and briefly can’t be seen.
Prolonging the darkness, the eclipse happens, hauntingly beautiful is the darkness during the day.
Suddenly dark, then suddenly bright out again, when it’s light out even the pigs play in their pen.
Exciting events happen whenever there’s an eclipse, the humans aplaude this stellar bliss.
About the Creator
Alex H Mittelman
I love writing and just finished my first novel. Writing since I was nine. I’m on the autism spectrum but that doesn’t stop me! If you like my stories, click the heart, leave a comment. Link to book: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CQZVM6WJ
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>That was a bad idea. I thought you knew… >Oh, the pathos! I don’t really know you as well as I should. In fact, I may not know the real you at all. That essential, sparkling you that you only reveal to a select few. Had I been paying more attention to the stories you are so fond of telling, in which you are invariably author, narrator and protagonist, I would not have been so foolish as to set you up on a blind date. After all, no friend has ever done anything of the kind for another. That’s preposterous. What is a friend, really?
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Comments (6)
Sun sun sun sun. Nice nice nice nice. Love love love love. Your your your your. Acrostic Acrostic Acrostic Acrostic!
Well done!
Very well written!!!!
This was fabulous, Alex!!! ♥ ♥ ♥
Hey, Alex, I liked it!
Very nice.