Eating peanuts while watching the eclipse.
Crunching on them hard, just for kicks.
Licking my lips when I’m done feels nice.
I open another bag before all the little mice.
Pouring the peanuts in my mouth is great.
Send me more peanuts please, it is my fate.
Eating more peanuts while watching the eclipse will make me do back flips.
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Alex H Mittelman
I love writing and just finished my first novel. Writing since I was nine. I’m on the autism spectrum but that doesn’t stop me! If you like my stories, click the heart, leave a comment. Link to book: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CQZVM6WJ
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Comments (5)
Back flips? Hahahahahaha. I wonder if the peanuts are actually peanuts 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Yes, certainly before the mice!
haha. I loved this bit of whimsy...and that final line is perfectly odd! Well done, Alex!
The backflips at the end was so unexpected😅
Two challenges in one , cool . I love snacking on peanuts, too.