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Drizzling heart

Solo sole seldom survives

By Karun Published 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2024

They never knew my name

Until the drizzling hearts spoke up

Solo sole seldom survives

May nights own lights

Not until they lose their identity

Pollen grains drift away

Cold breeze softens bee sound

Sunshine surrenders sacrifice

Runtime runs right

Solo sole seldom survives

So is my life

Candle light doesn't help

Yet survives hope in shivers

Smiles drown in river

Return yourself

Reattach myself

Bring the cold back to the nameless

Love's tears are faceless

emotion useless

Memories prolong

Time dilates listening to your words

Still alive?

Solo sole seldom survives.

They never knew my name

Until the drizzling hearts spoke up

Is it cold in Saturn?

Alone are you cold?

Until the drizzling hearts spoke up, Is it too old?

Mild melody melts memories

Solo sole seldom survives.

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Karun

🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️

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Comments (12)

  • angela hepworthabout 22 hours ago

    I loved seeing able to almost see and feel from your descriptions here alone—amazing work!

  • ROCK 2 months ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Anna 2 months ago

    Congrats on your Top Story!

  • angela hepworth2 months ago

    Congrats on top story!!

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Fabulous & congratulations on Top Story!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Oneg In The Arctic2 months ago

    This was eerie yet beautifully done

  • Congrats on the Top Story! I loved the somber, cold feel to this poem. You really captured an amazing mood!

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    I'm a believer in that refrain.

  • Christy Munson2 months ago

    Congratulations on Top Story. 🥳 I love how your words create a cold, aching distance that mirrors the cold, aching distance of space, physically and emotionally created. Especially love "Solo sole seldom survives."

  • Esala Gunathilake2 months ago

    Oh! Back to say congrats on your top story.

  • Esala Gunathilake2 months ago

    Thanks for sharing with us.

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