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Cries of Candle

In the night

By Rowan Finley Published 2 months ago 1 min read
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Human heart hardly flickers

Saddening sight

Through dark night

Alone

Again

Burn me

At both ends

At least

Until I’m

A waxy puddle

Or there’s nothing

Left

“I’m sorry,”

Tears drip

“I’m just really tired.”

Tears fall

I just want to be used

You know

It’s a season

It’s just a phase

I’m used to this

Remember?

I remind myself

That I’ve…

Been here before

Familiar frustrations

I just wanted to feel warmth

I was tired of rejection

People walked by

I stood taller on the shelf

They pick me up to sniff me

Their nose would wrinkle

I’d go back on the shelf

My price got lower and lower

Until finally

Someone bought me

They took me home

Setting me ablaze

At last

I could burn

and burn and burn

sad poetry

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. Aspiring licensed mental health counselor. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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Comments (10)

  • Andrea Corwin 2 months ago

    Now darn it I will look at the candles in the store differently (and many times will wrinkle my nose)! 😀

  • Colleen Walters2 months ago

    I love candles… heartfelt

  • Farhat Naseem2 months ago

    heart touching

  • Great poem! I loved the creative perspective on this.

  • Esala Gunathilake2 months ago

    Nice work from you.

  • Manisha Dhalani2 months ago

    What a beautiful, descriptive piece from the perspective of a candle. Very unique and brought about a lot of feelings. Nice one!

  • Emil indw2 months ago

    Will still be chosen even with patience -_-

  • Thank goodness someone bought the dear little candle!🥹

  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    Fantastic poem! Great work!

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