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Bullet Holes

Just a touch (Poppy's Challenge No. 2)

By Kendall Defoe Published 6 months ago 1 min read
Bullet Holes
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Once more, the prompt:

Braille? Yes, that was my thought

Reverse Braille that you have to dig

Through until you reach some meaning

And messages arrive on time.

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Loud Braille? Is that a thing?

My head hurts but not from the touch

Of those words I’m still looking for

Even as I write down in this space.

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Victimized again? You can read me

All those gaps in skin like papyrus;

Skin that becomes yellowed and dead

And you read me now taking my lines

.

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Something left to touch…

In a crowd, there's always one...

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Comments (9)

  • Halden Mile6 months ago

    Braille...a unique alphabet.

  • Catherine Nyomenda6 months ago

    I salute anyone with skills in using braille well. This is a good poem.

  • Novel Allen6 months ago

    Um, so a killer in a crowd of otherwise oblivious people seeking out a victim, or a victim seeing the killer coming. Many perspectives to this one.

  • Victimized again? You can read me All those gaps in skin like papyrus; Skin that becomes yellowed and dead And you read me now taking my lines These lines were my favourite! Your poem was poignant and evocative! I loved it!

  • Carol Townend6 months ago

    That is fantastic writing, and I love how the sensation of touch is related to feelings. I am guessing this is about not being able to see but being able to feel.

  • Hannah Moore6 months ago

    You've made me wonder whether poetry is a different experience if you have to touch it.

  • And all it takes is one....

  • Mark Gagnon6 months ago

    Kendall, you know how I AM WITH POEMS SO DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL IF I don't get it.

  • Poppy 6 months ago

    Wow, this was so creative and well done. "Victimized again? You can read me All those gaps in skin like papyrus; Skin that becomes yellowed and dead And you read me now taking my lines" This was my favourite stanza. So impactful.

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