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An Eye For An Eye A tooth for a Tooth

A Poem

By Louise Blake-Michael (Risen Phoenix)Published 6 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
An Eye For An Eye A tooth for a Tooth
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An eye for an eye.

A tooth for a tooth.

Revenge can be so real.

When I witnessed losing everything.

All I wanted was to make them pay.

Is losing my soul, worth the revenge which may so sweet.

All I want is to get even because of you.

As I mull over, the thoughts that may bring me to darkness.

Revenge can be so real, when action is put in place.

When losing an eye, what's the use.

When losing a tooth, you can just buy a new one to use.

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Louise Blake-Michael (Risen Phoenix)

LouLou maintains a boundary between her professional endeavors and personal life. She wears many hats as an author, blogger, and content creator. In various projects, each one a testament to her dedication and passion for storytelling.

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Comments (1)

  • The Invisible Writer6 months ago

    Nice

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