A-Torn Heart with Dry Eyes
And A Dizzy Mind..
He liked when I Was Real with Ppl
Until it came to him...
He Gave me Lies
When I was Honest with Him...
Oh you Remember Love, But Don’t you have
To Hide…
I mean Shouldn’t you Use Love To Survive…
I Know that your not Blind…So Didn’t you see How Hard I tried...
Not to Cry... I Mean...Keep Our Love Alive!
They say when you’ve been Together for so Long...You Start to Reflect
Why Collect my Negative ways and Reflect Them on me?
Couldn’t you Utilize my Good?
Why not just Show me The affection I Give...
Why Couldn’t you just Occur Real...
If you want to leave, we’ll just Go!
I Don’t wish to play this Sport anymore...
Attention Towards a Distraction...
Not seeing your Imperfections but Always Seem to catch My Reaction!
I Love Every sentimental Statement I Wrote Except the Last One...
Not Realizing but Accepting the Abuse, not sure What else to Do…
There’s Something Peculiar about the way You Speak...
Looking you square in the Face and Wondering what do you Think of me?
Silence until the subject Change prevails the wrong way to Communicate...
Are you Even aware of the Heart you continue to Break!
So Busy making sure that you were Satisfied, when I actually could’ve been using my Pride…
These Emotional Feelings are overthinking things and I’m Caught in a Love Drought...
I’m Going to sit here and write Down all of My Pain...
Recollections of A sweet Smile and Hazel Eyes...
I whispered a soft lullaby of the pleasure we had that twilight on the lakeside.
Although your Love wasn’t Quite the Same...
You Kept Playing the Game... That’s Insane.
If you Really Loved me Then Put Some Respect on my Name!
I don’t want to walk in Shame...of ever wanting Commitment from you...
Remorse of Giving you too many Tries...
Or Embarrassment Of Not Being Able to Realize The Lies...
Hidden Between The Gloss and Shadows of your Eyes.
When we Talked I Tried not to fill the Conversation with too many Why’s??
But honestly That’s All I Have to Say!
Why ,why oh Why????
I don’t even know How to Cry anymore...
A Torn Heart, with Dry Eyes and A Dizzy Mind…
(Stone Hearts Never Learn to sympathize)
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