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Big Time Surprise

A Big Time Rush Fanfiction

By Chrystal BerkeleyPublished 4 years ago 7 min read

My name is Chantel. I am 20 years old. My favourite colors are blue and purple. Okay, okay, you didn’t come here for an interview about me, now did you. This is a story that is full of excitement, drama,and could be very traumatic! Okay, I am just kidding about it being traumatic, but at the time, to me it was. This story is about when a guy that I loved, broke my heart, but then mended it back together again. Here is how it happened...

It all started when Kendall, my boyfriend, and I were walking to the park together when his phone rings. Kendall took his phone out to look at who was calling him. “So? Who was it?” I said. He looked at me with his shining green eyes and said, “I don’t know... wrong number.”

I thought that he was acting strange that day, and I knew that something was wrong. Then he got a text message. While he read it, I watched him closely. “Who was it?” I asked eagerly.

Kendall looked very guilty, he said, “What? Oh... it was just Dustin. He wants me to come help him with something.” I knew he was lying. I don’t know maybe it was the way he was staring at me, but I knew something was wrong.

“Oh... Okay... I guess I will see you later then?” I said knowing he was lying. After Kendall left, I called Dustin to see what was really going on. “Hey Dustin. Kendall said that you needed his help with something?” I asked over the phone. I heard Dustin studder saying, “I needed... help with writing a song!”

I was skeptical of this but I answered, “Oh... okay. Well, can I come and help?” There was a deep silence. “Hello?” I say into the phone. Dustin finally answered saying, “Oh, yeah, sorry.... well, I think we would be okay on our own. Thanks, anyways.” Forgetting that I was still talking to Dustin I hung up the phone. I was so mad! What was Kendall hiding from me?

My phone rang. Who could that be? Can you guess? If you guessed Kendall, you were correct. “Hello?” I answer. “Hey sorry about earlier. Dustin really needed me.” Kendall said. I think about what Dustin had told her that he needed, so I decided to ask what exactly did Dustin need.

Kendall stumbled for words. “What did he need? Oh... he needed me to help him with putting up his book shelves.” I thought back a minute. Did Dustin not say that he had asked Kendall to come over to help him write a song? Where did Kendall really go?

After contemplating I said, “Kendall, are you sure that is where you went and did?” Kendall answered, “Um... yeah... I’m pretty sure.” I hung up. I could not believe he would lie to me! Why would he lie?

I walked home. As soon as I got home, I saw a car in my driveway and saw Kendall waiting for me inside his car. He rolled his window down and said, “Hey, come on. I want to take you somewhere special.” I looked at Kendall and then at the seat beside him and said, “I can’t.” Kendall looked upset at this and asked, “Why not?”

I looked at him in his beautiful eyes trying so hard not to cry and said, “Well, I promised a friend that I’d go over to her house.” Kendall looked bummed. “Oh... okay...” After he said that he drove off. I felt so guilty about lying to him, but was he not the one who started this problem? Why wouldn’t I be upset? Did he not lie to me?

I walked into my house and saw my mom cooking. “Hey mom.” I said trying to sound like nothing was wrong. As I said this, she looked at me and said, “Oh, hi Chantel! I thought I saw Kendall in the driveway.”

“He was...” I said flatly. My mom knew that something was wrong and asked, “What happened?” I told her that nothing was wrong and how I thought that he was keeping something from me. I told her about the phone call and how he lied about who it was and what he had to go do. My mom just looked at me sadly and said, “Would you like something to eat?” I told her no thanks due to the fact that I was not really hungry.

As I left the kitchen to my room, I saw that my phone had a text. I looked at it and saw that it was Kendall. What did he want? It read: Hey Chantel. I have a feeling u r mad @ me and I am not sure y? I really would like 2 know. U mean the world 2 me. I would do anything to make u feel better. Plz txt me. Luv u! Kendall.

I didn’t know what to do! Should I text him? What if he never changed? What if he was trying to just make me happy and still hide things from me? After I got the text from Kendall, I got a text from his best friend, James. Oh boy! All of his friends knew! I had to decide whether or not to text James back. All he wanted to know was that if everything was okay. I decided to text him and tell him that I was going to a friend’s house and that everything was fine.

After texted James, I headed downstairs to go get something to eat when the doorbell rings. Who could that be? My mom goes and opens the door. Can you guess who it was? Yep, it was Kendall. My mom left me standing there in front of Kendall without saying a single word. It was so awkward with us just standing there, staring at each other. I did not know what to say or do. Kendall looked really mad at me because I was supposed to be at a friend’s house right now...

“What are you doing here? I thought you were going to a friend’s house?” Kendall asked confused. I just looked at him. I did not know what to say... I think I was in shock. What was he doing at my house? What? He doesn’t trust me? “I didn’t go yet. Kendall, what are you even doing here? Are you checking up on me? What? You do not trust me now? Is that what it is?” I said angrily.

I think Kendall got mad because I yelled this at him and he was quiet for a long time. He finally decided to answer, “Okay.... I am getting the idea that you are mad at me because of that phone call and the text. It is more like you don’t trust me!” That was so not true! I did trust him. I was just mad that he lied to me! I tell him everything! He knew who I hung out with when they were not together, but I cannot know who he was talking to?!? I told him that. I could not believe what he was telling me!

This is where the sad part clicks in. “Well, I guess this is good bye then.” Kendall said without emotion. This made me cry. “What? You are breaking up with me? Kendall, I care about our relationship... what about you? Do you care? Do you care about how I feel? I feel neglected and I feel as if my feelings do not even matter to you. I want my real boyfriend back!” I said honestly with tears falling from my eyes.

Kendall took me into his arms in a comforting hug and said, “Yes, I do understand. Did you still want to know what I was keeping a secret? I was trying to get you to come earlier but you blew me off.” I agreed of course. I mean, why not? What was the harm?

Kendall took me to his house and that was where Big Time Rush sang their song “Cover Girl” to me! It was James who called and texted Kendall while we were on our date! I thought that he was talking to another girl this whole time! He had been planning this for me because he wanted to show me that he thought I was beautiful inside and out.

After the song was finished, I thanked Kendall and Big Time Rush for the song. It was truly beautiful! I even showed Kendall my gratitude with a kiss and a hug. He held me close and kissed me passionately.

Yes, I loved him and he loved me. I was so happy because there would always be a spark between us. Our love will remain strong forever until the day we get married and have children of our own. I am so thankful for such a wonderful boyfriend who I can trust and love. I learned to trust him no matter what and to never jump to conclusions and if I feel angry, I need to be honest and straightforward.

THE END!

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About the Creator

Chrystal Berkeley

In a world where you can be anyone, be yourself .

Hello, my name is Chrystal Berkeley. I am 26 years old and an aspired writer/author. I love animals, Big Time Rush and James Maslow. Check out my latest story I am sure that you will love it

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