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I’d trace the contours of your gentle face.
My finger crayoned lines around your eyes.
And I would tug at your beard, just in case.
You'd push me away gently, which was wise.
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And as I grew into primary school.
You swung me around, safely in your arms.
Laughing into the air - a silly little fool,
A Daddy’s girl enchanted by your charms.
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But spells aren't supposed to be eternal.
Your magic vanished in a cloud of smoke.
And left in its place a tattered journal.
To trace the pieces of me that you broke.
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But daughters aren't just seasons in a life,
Switched out for another child, and a new wife.
The title is a brief reference to the poem, 'Daddy' by Sylvia Plath. You can read it here if you would like
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