Are you familiar with the point of no return? Where those around you can visibly see every fume?
You know, that awful place, where any sign of cognitive reasoning seems to have exited the room?
This is not the case, I regret to inform, and whether you agree is entirely your choice-
-but in this state, your senses are impaired by the desire to hear nothing but the tone and volume of your own voice.
I shall only respond to the calamity with tranquility and acting my age.
However, I am aware that this may further trigger your rage.
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Comments (6)
I love: "-but in this state, your senses are impaired by the desire to hear nothing but the tone and volume of your own voice." I know someone who this line encapsulates perfectly! Great poem!
Oooo, that was extremely powerful and profound. Loved your poem!
This is very deep
Cognitive senses and rage are felt as I read the poem. Awesome!
This is very deep indeed. Excellent work!
You encompass rage so well here!!