one who is so mesmerisingly beautiful
so soft and smooth to the touch
so quaint and triumphant
so lovely crafted
her essence is pure
unlike any kind
so unique and transfixed
in her glaze
loving crafted and heavenly made
one without fault, so pure, without vain
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George Hall
I'm a freelance creative writer from Australia, who likes to write about all sorts of different and unique things. I have a soft spot for spy and disguises related stories as well as fantasy fiction, I'm also a massive music fan.
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Lovely!
Awww, this was such a sweet poem! I loved it!