Was it necessary to cut her life short?
"you betrayed her loyalty"
What you did was wrong; ending her life was never an option.
You betrayed her loyalty, and you took her for granted.
You played with her heart, and you eventually crushed it.
You mistreated her every day, up until her soul left her body.
You ended her life out of jealousy.
Her family was looking forward to her greater future.
You snatched her away from them by performing the devil's task.
She should have run away from you long ago.
Her only mistake was to give you love and loyalty.
Why did you kill her? Was it necessary to cut her life short?
You're currently behind bars, hoping for a better fate.
Do you think you deserve a chance to get out of jail?
Do you think you deserve to live a peaceful life?
Her soul will haunt you until you die.
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Gloria Penelope
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>That was a bad idea. I thought you knew… >Oh, the pathos! I don’t really know you as well as I should. In fact, I may not know the real you at all. That essential, sparkling you that you only reveal to a select few. Had I been paying more attention to the stories you are so fond of telling, in which you are invariably author, narrator and protagonist, I would not have been so foolish as to set you up on a blind date. After all, no friend has ever done anything of the kind for another. That’s preposterous. What is a friend, really?
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So poignant! Much loved Gloria!
Oh I so badly want him to haunt her. Loved your poem!
This poignant and emotive poem powerfully conveys the tragedy of a life taken too soon, the weight of betrayal, and the haunting aftermath of a devastating act. The author's unflinching gaze into the darkness of the human experience evokes a profound sense of empathy and sorrow. Thank you for sharing!