Coddled children
Crush console
Candy
…
Viciously vicarious
Video vendors
Vie
…
Ravenously raging
Reality ruinously
Rent
…
Freedom flung
Far, fast
Furious
…
War wearied
Warriors
Weep
…
Society sinks
Stability
Shattered
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald is a 911 dispatcher of 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
Enjoyed the story? Support the Creator.
Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed. You could also pledge your support or give them a one-off tip, letting them know you appreciate their work.
Keep reading
More stories from Andrew C McDonald and writers in Poets and other communities.
About Writing
Most people talk about things that bother them as a way to vent their emotions, another way is through writing. As I sit writing in my car, I ponder how much writing, in itself, has helped me become the person I am today. I have endless amounts of pages filled with poems, stories, and sometimes random blurbs. Writing is a window into your soul. The simple action of writing has benefited me; by helping me to achieve a better memory, helping me to learn and grow intellectually, and helping me to communicate my emotions.
By Sarah Wilcox5 days ago in Journal
Comments (4)
Lol, I accidentally read as "society stinks" 🤣🤣🤣 I loved your mini sets of Tautograms!
Very cleverly written Andrew. It holds an important message. Well done.
This poem is a stark commentary on the disquieting facets of our world. Its Remarkable!
Fantastic social commentary!!!💕❤️❤️