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Upwards and Onwards

A mountainous verse

By TheSpinstressPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Upwards and Onwards
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My mother, she strolls

And she puffs and she stumbles;

Climbs, and she forgets.

heartbreak

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran12 months ago

    This made me think of Alzheimers and Dementia. It's just so sad!

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